One
final word about getting the science into science fiction - exposition.
"Show,
don't tell." are words of wisdom from every writing teacher. Lecturing
to the reader, either directly by the author or indirectly by one
character going on and on to another, is not a good story-telling
technique. For instance, which of the following make for a better
story?
"As
you know, Juliet, one consequence of our new music machine is that
it creates about fifteen minutes of random noise for every minute
of symphony," said the conductor, Mr. Messier.
vs.
Each
time she endured the fifteen minute cacophony, Juliet was rewarded
with 60 seconds of the most beautiful music she had ever heard.
Except,
perhaps, in some hard science fiction stories, the science should
be unobtrusive to the reader. It sets the scene, arouses
interest, and makes the reader want to read more (What is a "seed
village," anyway?). We need
clear, consistent, believable "science." We
don't need it rammed down our throat. We want it explained, but
we don't want to sit through a lecture.
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